The mail shot was very hard to do, i struggled quite a bit on getting the right layout for my pieces. the content i was happy with, i wanted it to be minimal and simple which it was. I also wanted to keep the same style as the posters so that on a whole it worked as a set. Which it does. My main concern, which was brought up in the crit was looking at the week day calendar on the inside and to make it look more like a calendar the problem was when i tried this out it just looked too messy and i really didn't like the style. Having said that the same issue was raised at the final crit and i ahve managed to come up with come other ideas which i am planning on tying out.
I really enjoyed this crit and on a whole i think the concept was successful and visually pleasing which is what i was aiming for too, i think it has a slight inter-activeness even though i took out the main part of it being interactive. I am happy with the responses i got and will work on this project further just tweaking it.
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